Antigone Cadmus

Completed. Who's next?

Thanks a lot, guys! I'm trying to devote my study hall period or down time to just scribbling down things in a notebook. With a little work, I might be ...

Ha. I like them. 8/10 :D

I wasn't sure whether I should post this in Writer's Corner or here... oh well. *sigh* I haven't written a word in five months . I just have no inspiration! ...

I saw in another one of your posts that you don't like grammar reviews. So instead of being nit-picky, I'm going to point out a few little "errors" I noticed. ...

William Shatner in your signature = ?

I'm fine with this being a personal experience, as it is your life, not mine. But does it have to be so explicitly... sexual? Girl on girl, guy on guy, ...

Well, you said you didn't want any critique on your grammar. Tell me if you would like some, because I noticed many mistakes grammaticaly. I'll just quickly mention one problem ...

Hey, Evi! Here as requested. First off, I'd like to ask you a question: Have you ever written in present tense before? Present tense always strikes me as being very ...

:oops: So here I finally am... I apologise about the long wait. I've been really busy. Once again, I am very sorry! :oops: My critique is in bold. Poofles also ...

Hey, Hippie Vampire! Try not to feel insulted when you get harsh reviews. Here on Young Writers Society, we only want to improve your writing. It's fine to include large ...

Hey, Carly! This piece has a lot of potential. But you really, really need to work on your grammar. The most glaring mistake I noticed was your dialogue problems. Whenever ...

Hey, OverEasy, my fellow Purp. :wink: As a prologue, this is great. It gets the reader invested into the story and gives us a good taste of your character. his ...

What in particular would you like to know? That's a long period of time. What do I know already? Do you need help with the history of Stalin and Trotsky? ...

You could read some William Faulkner. He has a lot of great classics: --The Sound and the Fury --As I Lay Dying Or Upton Sinclair: --The Jungle (great book from ...